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[이름] [이름],
Thanks for sharing your thoughts about the World Cup.
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-T. Ash
I think star player of world cup is Yamal of Spain.
>> I think the star player of the World Cup is Yamal of Spain.
This player is very young.. but this player has skill, positiveness and goal adjusting.
>> This player is very young, but he has the skill, positiveness and flexibility.
so if In korea choise I will choose Kang-in.
>> In Korea, I think our star player is Kang-in.
He has a lot of talent.
>> He is very talented.
I am confident home advantage is important for winning. because We had experience at 2002 year.
>> I am sure that home advantage helps win the World Cup because we experienced it in 2002.
we went semi-final.
>> We were able to reach the semi-final.
It is because people cheered for players
>> It is because people cheered for the players.
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