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Who do you think will the FIFA World Cup?
What does it take for a team to win the World Cup?
I think I am sure France team will win. The team had experience runner-up. and The player are skilled.
Mbappe is most famous. The team can\'t win only one player play well.
The team need to have organization to win.
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-T. Ash
[이름] [이름],
Thanks for sharing your thoughts here.
I agree that a team needs to be well-organized to win.
-T. Ash
I think I am sure France team will win.
>> I think France will win.
The team had experience runner-up. and The player are skilled.
>> The team has reached the finals before, and the players are skilled.
Mbappe is most famous.
>> Mbappe is the most famous player.
The team can\'t win only one player play well.
>> The team can\'t win if only one player plays well.
The team need to have organization to win.
>> The team needs good organization to win.
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