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-T. Ash
This is very very important problem..
>> This is a very important issue.
If we live the man, we have to go military.
>> If you are a man, you have to serve in the military.
but We can get military exemption conditions.
>> There are ways to get a military service exemption.
If we get winning gold medal in olympic, We don\'t have to go military.
>> If you win a gold medal in the Olympics, you are granted an exemption from military service.
also If we advance to the semifinals in world cup. we don\'t have to go military.
>> If you advance to the semifinals in the World Cup, you are also exempted from military service.
We don\'t have to waste time and don\'t have to suffer.
>> You don’t have to waste time and suffer.
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