homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi there, this is Ji[이름]. I’m calling because I saw an ad about a sale at your shop, and I had a couple of questions about it. I was [이름]dering when the sale actually starts. And also, could you let me know when the last day of the sale is?
Oh, that’s great. That gives me enough time to visit. I’m actually interested in the new carbon-plated running shoes. Could you tell me if that product is also on sale and if so, what percentage off it is?
Oh, I see. It’s a five percentage discount because it’s a new arrival. Thanks for letting me know. Also, as far as I know the shoes come in two colors, white and black, is there another color available?
That’s truly [이름]derful news, because I really love the color hot pink! Thank you so much for answering my inquiries. I’ll visit tomorrow afternoon, then. Have a nice day!
P.S. I\'m always grateful for your encouraging, Teacher Donna.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Jenny!
It\'s always a pleasure assisting and elevating your skills. As you stay consistent and focused on your goals, you overall speech and writing skillset will be ready not only for the OPIc test but also for your future endeavors using the English language.
Below, I can see that you understood the whole point of today\'s discussion by selecting very good vocabulary to describe the items for shopping as well as adding the correct expressions for transitions.
Congratulations! Excellent job!
See you in class tomorrow.
-T. Donna~
>>> Correct! Very good sentences!
Oh, that’s great. That gives me enough time to visit. I’m actually interested in the new carbon-plated running shoes. Could you tell me if that product is also on sale and if so, what percentage off it is?
Oh, that’s great. That gives me enough time to visit. I’m actually interested in the new carbon-plated running shoes. Could you tell me if that product is also on sale and if so, what percentage off it is?
>>> Correct! Very good sentences!
Oh, I see. It’s a five percentage discount because it’s a new arrival. Thanks for letting me know. Also, as far as I know the shoes come in two colors, white and black, is there another color available?
Oh, I see. It’s a five percentage discount because it’s a new arrival. Thanks for letting me know. Also, as far as I know the shoes come in two colors, white and black, is there another color available?
>>> Oh, I see. It’s a five percentage discount because it’s a new arrival. Thanks for letting me know. As far as I know the shoes come in two colors, white and black, is there another color available?
That’s truly [이름]derful news, because I really love the color hot pink! Thank you so much for answering my inquiries. I’ll visit tomorrow afternoon, then. Have a nice day!
That’s truly [이름]derful news, because I really love the color hot pink! Thank you so much for answering my inquiries. I’ll visit tomorrow afternoon, then. Have a nice day!
>>> Correct! Very good sentences!
P.S. I\'m always grateful for your encouraging, Teacher Donna.
P.S. I\'m always grateful for your encouraging, Teacher Donna.
>>> P.S. I\'m always grateful for your encouragement, Teacher Donna.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.