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I often join the church volunteer everyweek. so my son also paticipate the sunday school.
so I always enjoy all activity. and I like singing and worship. I like to do my talent.
as you know, I have IT knowledge. so I can support them.
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[이름] [이름],
Thanks for sharing your answers here.
T. Ash
I often join the church volunteer everyweek.
>> I often join the church volunteer group every week.
so my son also paticipate the sunday school.
>> My son also participates in the Sunday school.
so I always enjoy all activity. and I like singing and worship.
>> I enjoy all activities like singing and worship.
I like to do my talent.
>> I like to share my talent.
as you know, I have IT knowledge. so I can support them.
>> As you are aware, I have IT knowledge, and I use it to support them.
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