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My favorite hobby is watching movies because time goes by quickly when I watch them.
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My favorite hobby is watching movies because time goes by quickly when I watch them.
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OR>>> My favorite hobby is watching movies because I enjoy them, and time seems to pass quickly while I am watching.
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