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2026-07-08 · 첨삭 강사 Jenna

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I\'m currently interviewing for overseas sales positions because I want to further develop my career in international business. While I\'m exploring a few opportunities, this position stands out to me the most because it closely matches my experience, strengths, and the direction I want to grow in. If given the opportunity, I would be very excited to join your team.

강사 첨삭

Hi, Ms. [Name][이름]! Please check the following.

~T. Jenna

I\'m currently interviewing for overseas sales positions because I want to further develop my career in international business.

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While I\'m exploring a few opportunities, this position stands out to me the most because it closely matches my experience, strengths, and the direction I want to grow in.

>>Correct

If given the opportunity, I would be very excited to join your team.

>>Correct

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I\'m currently interviewing for a few overseas sales positions because I want to continue building my career in international business. While I\'m considering several opportunities, this position stands out the most because it closely aligns with my experience, strengths, and career goals. If I\'m given the opportunity, I\'d be excited to contribute to your team and grow with the company.

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