homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I really love going to cafe’s and spending time there.
There are two types of cafe’s I usually visit.
The first kind is located in trendy hot place like Seongsu-dong, Hongdae, or Gangnam, where I usually spend there chat with my friends. However, since these areas are so popular, they tend to be packed with people, which isn’t really my type.
So when I’m alone I prefer to go to a cafe in front of my house.
It’s not as spacious as the ones in trendy areas, but the coffee tastes better, and it’s much less crowded.
That’s why I love spending my free times at cafe’s.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ji[이름]!
Your answer shows very good effort of leveling up your vocabulary and overall grammar and composition.
Take note that plural forms of nouns do not have apostrophes (\'). Moreover, non-countable nouns such as \"time\" do not for them plural form especially in your last sentence.
Thank you for sending this for your further development. Very good!
See you in class.
-T. Donna~
There are two types of cafe’s I usually visit.
>>> I really love going to cafe’s and spending time there.
There are two types of cafes I usually visit. Very good sentences!
The first kind is located in trendy hot place like Seongsu-dong, Hongdae, or Gangnam, where I usually spend there chat with my friends. However, since these areas are so popular, they tend to be packed with people, which isn’t really my type.
>>> The first kind is located in a trendy hot place like Seongsu-dong, Hongdae, or Gangnam, where I usually spend time there chatting with my friends. However, since these areas are so popular, they tend to be packed with people, which isn’t really my type.
There are two types of cafes I usually visit. Very good sentences!
The first kind is located in trendy hot place like Seongsu-dong, Hongdae, or Gangnam, where I usually spend there chat with my friends. However, since these areas are so popular, they tend to be packed with people, which isn’t really my type.
>>> The first kind is located in a trendy hot place like Seongsu-dong, Hongdae, or Gangnam, where I usually spend time there chatting with my friends. However, since these areas are so popular, they tend to be packed with people, which isn’t really my type.
So when I’m alone I prefer to go to a cafe in front of my house.
It’s not as spacious as the ones in trendy areas, but the coffee tastes better, and it’s much less crowded.
That’s why I love spending my free times at cafe’s.
>>> So when I’m alone I prefer to go to a cafe in front of my house.
It’s not as spacious as the ones in trendy areas, but the coffee tastes better, and it’s less crowded.That’s why I love spending my free time at cafe’s.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.