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2026-07-09 · 첨삭 강사 Ash

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I don\'t want the site IT manager. but If I get promotion, I need manager position. If I become site IT manager , I will manage overall and I have to [이름]d a budge first of all. and I should speak english. because maybe I need to report for globalteam.

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[이름] [이름], 

Thanks for sharing your points here. 

See you!


T. Ash


I don\'t want the site IT manager. but If I get promotion, I need manager position.

>> I don’t want to be the Site IT manager, but if I get promoted, I will choose the managerial position. 


If I become site IT manager , I will manage overall

and I have to [이름]d a budge first of all.

>> If I become the Site IT manager, I will have to manage everything, including the budget. 


and I should speak english. because maybe I need to report for globalteam. 

>> I should also be able to speak English because I might have to report to the global team. 


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