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I don\'t want the site IT manager. but If I get promotion, I need manager position.
If I become site IT manager , I will manage overall
and I have to [이름]d a budge first of all.
and I should speak english. because maybe I need to report for globalteam.
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[이름] [이름],
Thanks for sharing your points here.
See you!
T. Ash
I don\'t want the site IT manager. but If I get promotion, I need manager position.
>> I don’t want to be the Site IT manager, but if I get promoted, I will choose the managerial position.
If I become site IT manager , I will manage overall
and I have to [이름]d a budge first of all.
>> If I become the Site IT manager, I will have to manage everything, including the budget.
and I should speak english. because maybe I need to report for globalteam.
>> I should also be able to speak English because I might have to report to the global team.
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