homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi there mom! Do you remember we\'re gonna watch a movie at the theater tomorrow 9 pm?
But, actually the day after tomorrow, a work schedule for the part-timer has been set.
So I think it is better to watch a movie earlier.
Are you available tomorrow 7 pm?
Watching a movie after having dinner will be great timing to see it.
Oh, you have housework to do? That makes sense, no worries.
Then how about we change the movie and watch something on Netflix tonight instead?
Oh you\'re too tired to watch anything tonight? That\'s okay, let\'s just save it for another day.
Then the day after tomorrow, I have work, and actually there\'s a theater right next to my workplace.
How about after my work?
That\'s nice to hear you\'re available. I\'ll go to the website and change the date and time. Okay, see you soon!
강사 첨삭
Good day again, Ji[이름]!
This is a very natural conversation in English. It is highly imaginative and very kind. I truly hope that you speak this way to your mother. ^^
The suggestions are logical and in accordance to your daily life. As I said, the more specific and some addition of personal experience, the elements of your answer becomes complete. Continue honing your idioms and vocabulary bank.
Congratulations on your correct sentences! Carry on!
See you.
-T. Donna~
But, actually the day after tomorrow, a work schedule for the part-timer has been set.
So I think it is better to watch a movie earlier.
Are you available tomorrow 7 pm?
Watching a movie after having dinner will be great timing to see it.
>> Hi there mom! Do you remember we\'re gonna/ going to watch a movie at the theater tomorrow at 9 pm?
But, actually the day after tomorrow, a work schedule for the part-timer has been set.
So I think it is better to watch a movie earlier.
Are you available tomorrow 7 pm/ at 7pm?
Watching a movie after having dinner will be great timing to see it.
Oh, you have housework to do? That makes sense, no worries.
Then how about we change the movie and watch something on Netflix tonight instead?
But, actually the day after tomorrow, a work schedule for the part-timer has been set.
So I think it is better to watch a movie earlier.
Are you available tomorrow 7 pm/ at 7pm?
Watching a movie after having dinner will be great timing to see it.
Oh, you have housework to do? That makes sense, no worries.
Then how about we change the movie and watch something on Netflix tonight instead?
>> Correct! Very good sentences!
Oh you\'re too tired to watch anything tonight? That\'s okay, let\'s just save it for another day.
Then the day after tomorrow, I have work, and actually there\'s a theater right next to my workplace.
Oh you\'re too tired to watch anything tonight? That\'s okay, let\'s just save it for another day.
Then the day after tomorrow, I have work, and actually there\'s a theater right next to my workplace.
How about after my work?
>> Correct! Very good sentences!
That\'s nice to hear you\'re available. I\'ll go to the website and change the date and time. Okay, see you soon!
That\'s nice to hear you\'re available. I\'ll go to the website and change the date and time. Okay, see you soon!
>> Correct! Very good sentences!
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