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Hi, Ms. [Name][이름]! Please check on the following.
1. What sets you apart from the other candidates?
>>I believe my biggest strength is my ability to manage the entire export process from start to finish. I have experience developing overseas customers through international exhibitions and business meetings, while also coordinating regulatory support, production schedules, and shipments to ensure on-time delivery. Through this experience, I learned that overseas sales is not only about acquiring new customers, but also about building trust by providing reliable products and services. I believe this experience will allow me to contribute to Shinpoong Pharm’s global business and support the stable supply and international growth of Pyramax.
2. Why did you apply to Shinpoong Pharm?
>>I applied to Shinpoong Pharm because I want to continue developing my career in pharmaceutical overseas sales. At Seoul Pharm, I managed the export process, including regulatory support, production coordination, and shipment management. Through this experience, I realized that pharmaceutical sales is not only about selling products, but also about ensuring reliable access to essential medicines. I was especially impressed by Pyramax because it contributes to improving public health in countries affected by malaria, and I would like to use my experience to support Shinpoong Pharm’s global growth.
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