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[이름] [이름],
I think that is a very good recommendation.
See you!
T. Ash
I want to recommend big car.
>> I want to recommend a big toy car.
if new parents have a boy, I recommend big car. because I think I have to save money.
>> If a new parent has a baby boy, I will advise them to buy a big toy car because they will save money in the long run.
so I think I request to buy big car with my parents and friends.
>> Instead of buying many small toys, I would ask my parents and friends to buy one big toy car as a gift.
if new parents have a girl, I recommend kitchen toy.
>> But if they have a baby girl, I recommend that they buy a kitchen toy set.
Most of children likes it. my son also like it, too.
>> Most children like it and my son likes it too.
When girl friends of my son came my home. they are playing cooking play.
>> When some of my son’s friends come to visit, they like to play with the kitchen toy set.
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