Homework
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Is it more important to be able to work with a group of people on a team or to work independently? Use reasons and specific examples to
support your answer.
It is not important to work with a team or to work independently.
I think that most important is team work. We can not live alone, alone can not do anything. Suppose that some person finished well some project. But is it only one person\'s effort? I think there were a lot of support. To work in the company never do alone.
강사 첨삭
Hello Eva!
You can speak the English well, you can make a good conservation, if you just push yourself to speak and improve your skills,
Just believe in yourself that you can.
Have a great day!!!
T. Jeny
>>correct
I think that most important is team work.
I think that most important is team work.
>>I think that the most important thing is teamwork.
We can not live alone, alone can not do anything.
>>We can not live alone; we cannot do anything alone.
Suppose that some person finished well some project.
>>Suppose that a person has finished a project well.
But is it only one person\'s effort?
>>correct
I think there were a lot of support.
>>I think we need a lot of support.
To work in the company never do alone.
>>To make a company work, it needs teamwork.
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