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Do you think that happiness lies within you? Or does it depend upon other people and external things?
I think that happiness lies within me but this feeling come from other people and external things. We say \'if we share happiness it will more happy, if our sad share it become smaller\'.
If I live alone, I don\'t have any happiness and unhappiness. We have to live together, so my happiness come from my family and friends.
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Hello Eva
Perseverance is what we need to achieve a goal in life. Studying could be very tough at times but through hard work you can see yourself speaking the language well.
T. Jeny
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I think that happiness lies within me but this feeling come from other people and external things.
I think that happiness lies within me but this feeling come from other people and external things.
>>I think that happiness lies within me, but this feeling comes from other people and external things.
We say \'if we share happiness it will more happy, if our sad share it become smaller\'.
>>We say, \'if we share happiness, it will be happier, if we share sadness, it becomes smaller.
If I live alone, I don\'t have any happiness and unhappiness.
If I live alone, I don\'t have any happiness and unhappiness.
>>If I live alone, I won\'t be happy or unhappy.
We have to live together, so my happiness come from my family and friends.
>>We have to live with others, so my happiness comes from my family and friends.
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