homework.
학생이 쓴 원문
I think I don’t go see a doctor that often, because in everyday life, I take nutritional supplements regularly. But, when the winter comes, I usually see a doctor about twice a year, and the most common reason for going is almost always a cold. My symptoms are usually a sore throat when I swallow or some phlegm. when I describe these symptoms, the doctor takes my temperature, looks inside the mouth, or checks my chest with a stethoscope. After that, the doctor gives me medicine like antibiotics, which helps me get better from the cold. I take it two or three times a day. I’ve actually been seeing this doctor since I was four, and if take the medicine, I usually feel better in three days. But since staying healthy matters most to me, I try to take extra good care of my condition during the change of seasons.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Ji[이름]!
This is a very well organized and crafted composition. What is more, this even makes a better speaking test answer!
Given the time limit, you have to be able to discuss all of these within 90 seconds. Hence as suggested in class, you have to make sure that your sentences are direct to the point and in active voice.
As usual, review the underlined parts of this homework for your mastery. great job!
See you.
-T. Donna~
>> I think I don’t go to see a doctor that often, because in everyday life, I take nutritional supplements regularly. But, when the winter comes, I usually see a doctor about twice a year, and the most common reason for going is almost always a cold. My symptoms are usually a sore throat when I swallow or have some phlegm.
when I describe these symptoms, the doctor takes my temperature, looks inside the mouth, or checks my chest with a stethoscope. After that, the doctor gives me medicine like antibiotics, which helps me get better from the cold. I take it two or three times a day.
>> When I describe these symptoms, the doctor takes my temperature, looks inside the/ my mouth, or checks my chest with a stethoscope. After that, the doctor gives me medicine like antibiotics, which helps me get better from the cold. I take it two or three times a day.
I’ve actually been seeing this doctor since I was four, and if take the medicine, I usually feel better in three days. But since staying healthy matters most to me, I try to take extra good care of my condition during the change of seasons.
>> I’ve actually been seeing this doctor since I was four, and if I take the medicine, I usually feel better in three days. But since staying healthy matters most to me, I try to take extra good care of my condition during the change of seasons.
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