Homework 5
학생이 쓴 원문
My best friend name is Jimin, and her nickname is Jisae. That is made by me, so I call her Jisae.
We first met in elementary school, and we actually became close friends when we got to middle school.
Jisae and I spent time together almost everyday.
After graduation high school, we become more familiar.
We enjoyed freedom as an adult.
I especially remember the trip we took to Nha-Trang last summer.
We swum everyday, ate mangos, and drank beer.
I can\'t forget those memories because, it was my favorite trip with her.
But, these days she is working at hair salon,
so we don\'t get to see each other as often as we used to.
I\'ll give her a call this weekend to catch up.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Jenny!
This answer is complete with all the elements required in a speaking test. The only suggestion is the subject-verb agreement, and correct preposition.
In addition, use some of the vocabulary words we discuss in class sparingly so that your speech will level up in substance.
Congratulations for all the correct sentences! Great job
See you.
-T. Donna~
>>> My best friend\'s name is Jimin, and her nickname is Jisae. That is made by me, so I call her Jisae.
We first met in elementary school, and we actually became close friends when we got to middle school.
Jisae and I spent time together almost everyday.
We first met in elementary school, and we actually became close friends when we got to middle school.
Jisae and I spent time together almost everyday.
>>> Correct! Very good sentences!
After graduation high school, we become more familiar.
We enjoyed freedom as an adult.
After graduation high school, we become more familiar.
We enjoyed freedom as an adult.
>>> After graduation in high school, we became more familiar.
We enjoyed freedom as adults.
I especially remember the trip we took to Nha-Trang last summer.
We swum everyday, ate mangos, and drank beer.
I can\'t forget those memories because, it was my favorite trip with her.
We enjoyed freedom as adults.
I especially remember the trip we took to Nha-Trang last summer.
We swum everyday, ate mangos, and drank beer.
I can\'t forget those memories because, it was my favorite trip with her.
>>> Correct! Very good sentences!
But, these days she is working at hair salon,
so we don\'t get to see each other as often as we used to.
But, these days she is working at hair salon,
so we don\'t get to see each other as often as we used to.
>>> But these days, she is working at hair salon,
so we don\'t get to see each other as often as we used to. // Correct!
I\'ll give her a call this weekend to catch up.
so we don\'t get to see each other as often as we used to. // Correct!
I\'ll give her a call this weekend to catch up.
>>> Correct!
Or: I will get in touch with her this weekend.
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