Homework) Compare face-to-face meetings and online meetings. Which is more effective and why?
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These days almost people uses online meetings instead of face-to-face meetings.
This penomenon proves that meetings not has to be face-to-face.
Because online meetings are reduce unnecessary move time and it makes possible to have a meeting with someone who I can\'t face-to-face meeting realistically.
I also agree about that.
But, it might be applicable business-only, when I had face-to-face meetings it\'s closer to success.
In my opinion, online meetings are more effective but sometimes face-to-face meetings also needs.
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These days almost people uses online meetings instead of face-to-face meetings.
>> These days, most people use online meetings instead of face-to-face meetings.
This penomenon proves that meetings not has to be face-to-face.
>> This phenomenon proves that meetings do not always have to be conducted in person.
Because online meetings are reduce unnecessary move time and it makes possible to have a meeting with someone who I can\'t face-to-face meeting realistically.
>> Online meetings reduce unnecessary travel time, and they make it possible to meet with people whom I cannot realistically meet face-to-face.
I also agree about that.
>> I also agree with this idea.
But, it might be applicable business-only, when I had face-to-face meetings it\'s closer to success.
>> However, I think this is mainly applicable in business situations. In my experience, face-to-face meetings are sometimes more likely to lead to success.
In my opinion, online meetings are more effective but sometimes face-to-face meetings also needs.
>> In my opinion, online meetings are more efficient, but face-to-face meetings are still necessary in some situations.
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