homework for [이름]

2020-06-23 · 첨삭 강사 Fiona

학생이 쓴 원문

Here is my homework. 1. What you need to so is water of cold. 2. If I were you I\'d like to go to italy with my family. 3. You\'d better teach english lesson.

강사 첨삭

Good morning Mr. [이름]! How was work?

I\'m really sorry about yesterday, but thank you for doing your homework.

See you later :)


Here\'s your correction!

1. What you need to do is water of cold.
>>What you need to do is drink cold water.
2. If I were you I\'d like to go to italy with my family.
>>CORRECT! But you have to capitalize I in Italy.
3. You\'d better teach english lesson.
>>CORRECT! - Hahaha, sorry about yesterday Mr. [이름]. I think this is for me :)

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