homework for [이름]

2020-04-23 · 첨삭 강사 Fiona

학생이 쓴 원문

1) I\'m working at my company 2) I was in the hospital yesterday afternoon 3) I have a new cell phone 4) I always had a wallet 5) I will go to the supermarket this afternoon 6) I went to the hospital yesterday 7) I need to study english 8) I want more polish friends 9) I have to check it out 10) I had to ----> I don\'t know ....

강사 첨삭

Good morning Mr. [이름]!

Thanks for doing your homework again.

I have added more information about the corrections, so I hope it\'ll help.

I\'ve considered your minor mistakes for today, but no more next time - hahaha.

See you later!

1) I\'m working at my company.
>>CORRECT!
- Don\'t forget to put a period (.) at the end of your sentence.
2) I was in the hospital yesterday afternoon.
>>CORRECT!
- This was the example yesterday Mr. [이름].
- Don\'t forget to put a period (.) at the end of your sentence.
3) I have a new cell phone.
>>CORRECT!
4) I always had a wallet.
>>CORRECT!
5) I will go to the supermarket this afternoon.
>>CORRECT!
- Don\'t forget to put a period (.) at the end of your sentence.
6) I went to the hospital yesterday.
>>CORRECT!
- Don\'t forget to put a period (.) at the end of your sentence.
7) I need to study english.
>>I need to study English.
- The word English should be capitalized because it is a proper noun.
8) I want more polish friends.
>>I want more Polish friends.
- The word Polish should be capitalized too.
- Don\'t forget your proper punctuation, (./,/?/!)
9) I have to check it out.
>>CORRECT!
-Don\'t forget to put a period (.) at the end of your sentence.
10) I had to ----> I don\'t know ....
>>I had to go to work yesterday.

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