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2020-04-27 · 첨삭 강사 Fiona

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hello.. Fiona I send you my homework. checking plkease. 1) I want to do speak english very well 2) I want to go korea and i want to go trip in italy 3) I want to come at my house with friend. 4) I want to see korea movie. 5) I want to eat after making polish food. 6) I want to sleep early today because i\'m very tired. 7) I want to read a lot of poland books but i\'m not read polish langue. 8) Iwant to write to love letter. 9) I can\'t do make poland food 10) I must see Fiona everyday because she is my english teacher.

강사 첨삭

Good morning Mr. [이름]! 
I hope you had a wonderful weekend. 
Thank you for doing today\'s homework. 

1) I want to do speak english very well
>>I want to speak English very well. 
2) I want to go korea and i want to go trip in italy
>>I want to go to back to Korea and go on a trip to Italy. 
3) I want to come at my house with friend.
>>I want my friends to come over my house. 
4) I want to see korea movie.
>>I want to see Korean movies. 
5) I want to eat after making polish food.
>>I want to eat after making Polish food. 
6) I want to sleep early today because i\'m very tired.
>>CORRECT! But you should write i\'m this way \"I\'m\". 
7) I want to read a lot of poland books but i\'m not read polish langue.
>>I want to read books in Polish books, but I don\'t know how the language. 
8) Iwant to write to love letter.
>>I want to write a love letter. 
9) I can\'t do make poland food
>>I can\'t make Polish food. 
OR: I can\'t make Polish dishes. 
10) I must see Fiona everyday because she is my english teacher. 
>>CORRECT! But write english this way \"English\". 

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