homework for [이름]

2020-06-01 · 첨삭 강사 Fiona

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I send you my homework. 1.How often do you visit the dentist? - I visit the dentist twice a year. 2. What is the most painful procedure in a dental clinic? - I think scaling and anesthesia injections are the most painful procedures.

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Happy First Mr. [이름]! 
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Nice work! 

I send you my homework.
IT WOULD BE BETTER TO SAY: Here\'s my homework.

1.How often do you visit the dentist?
- I visit the dentist twice a year.
>>CORRECT!
OR: I go to the dentist twice a year.

2. What is the most painful procedure in a dental clinic?
- I think scaling and anesthesia injections are the most painful procedures.
>>CORRECT!
OR: I think scaling and anesthesia are the most painful procedures.

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