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2020-06-09 · 첨삭 강사 Fiona

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Here is my homework. Homework: what kind of music do you listen to when you are sad? 1. I could heard rock music when I was sad. 2. I didn\'t sad in poland so I need not heard of poland music. 3. I like some have drink of beer than I heard music when I was sad. 4. I will be able to make an effort for happy everyday so I need not music.

강사 첨삭

Good morning Mr. [이름]!

I\'m surprised that you listen to rock music!

Yes, I like that. Always try to make your day happy :)

Thanks again :)

1. I could heard rock music when I was sad.
>>I listen to rock music when I am sad.
OR: I listen to rock music when I\'m sad.
2. I didn\'t sad in poland so I need not heard of poland music.
>>I am not sad here in Poland, so I don\'t listen to music.
OR: I\'m not sad here in Poland, so I don\'t listen to music.
3. I like some have drink of beer than I heard music when I was sad.
>>I like to drink some beer than to listen to music when I am sad.
OR: I prefer to drink some beer than to listen to music when I\'m sad.
4. I will be able to make an effort for happy everyday so I need not music.
>>I will try to make my daily life happy, so I don\'t have to listen to music.

OR: I\'ll try to make my daily life happy, so I don\'t have to listen to music.

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