Homework) What are the career opportunities in urban areas?
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I guess career opportunities in urban areas are very various.
Because there are a lot of comanise and people in the urban areas.
And they are so active eoconomy people.
So, there are a lot of restaurants, cafes, stores, and super markets.
These are all career opportunities.
But, in my opinion, It is not a good penomenon.
If keep increase companies only in urban areas, It will be caused collapse of economy.
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~~Teacher Ryka^^
I guess career opportunities in urban areas are very various. Because there are a lot of comanise and people in the urban areas.
>> I guess career opportunities in urban areas are very diverse because there are many companies and people in those areas.
And they are so active eoconomy people.
>> The economy is also very active, which creates more job opportunities.
So, there are a lot of restaurants, cafes, stores, and super markets. These are all career opportunities.
>> As a result, there are many restaurants, cafes, stores, and supermarkets, which all provide career opportunities.
But, in my opinion, It is not a good penomenon.
>> However, in my opinion, this is not a good phenomenon.
If keep increase companies only in urban areas, It will be caused collapse of economy.
>> If companies continue to increase only in urban areas, it may cause an economic imbalance and could eventually lead to economic problems or collapse in other regions.
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