Homework) What does “happiness” really mean in modern society? Has its meaning changed compared to t
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These days, Happiness has become too difficult thing.
In my opinion, It is due to a social media.
Because people like to compare with others more and more.
Plus it\'s too easy to compare with others happiness even though they know that people only post happy scenes.
I want to just enjoy my happiness without compare with others.
I don\'t want to look like happy in others eyes like happiness of modern society.
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Hello! I\'m so glad you made the effort to finish the homework. You did an outstanding job expressing your thoughts—keep up the excellent work!^^
~~Teacher Ryka^^
>> Nowadays, true happiness seems harder to find.
In my opinion, It is due to a social media.
>> I think social media is one of the main reasons.
Because people like to compare with others more and more.
>> People constantly compare their lives with others online.
Plus it\'s too easy to compare with others happiness even though they know that people only post happy scenes.
>> Even though we know that people usually share only their best moments, we still end up comparing ourselves to them.
I want to just enjoy my happiness without compare with others.
>> Personally, I want to enjoy my life in my own way without worrying about others.
I don\'t want to look like happy in others eyes like happiness of modern society.
>> I don’t want fake happiness that only looks good to other people. I want genuine happiness for myself.
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