Homework) What is the most appropriate punishment for prank callers: fines, jail, or community servi
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In my opinion, The prank callers has to given an appropriate punishment. Plus It has to be case by case.
If someone prank call to fire station, who have to pay fines and do community service to hard.
I wish to change someone through by punishment.
To do that, If someone needs to know the meaning of why they are being punished when they are punished.
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In my opinion, The prank callers has to given an appropriate punishment. Plus It has to be case by case.
>> In my opinion, prank callers should be given appropriate punishment. It should also be handled on a case-by-case basis.
If someone prank call to fire station, who have to pay fines and do community service to hard. I wish to change someone through by punishment.
>> If someone makes a prank call to a fire station, they should pay fines and do community service. I hope punishment can help change people’s behavior.
To do that, If someone needs to know the meaning of why they are being punished when they are punished.
>> To achieve this, people need to understand the reason why they are being punished.
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