How can families stay close when they live far away from each other?
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I share my daily routine with my family through social media. I often talk to my brother who lives far away through social media. When my family talk about their worries, l listen sincerely.
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Hello, Susan!
I think this is one of the biggest advantages of social media — bringing people who are far from each other closer. It\'s nice to know that you have a way to communicate with your family and keep them updated by posting as well.
- T. Caitlyn
I share my daily routine with my family through social media.
>> CORRECT
I often talk to my brother who lives far away through social media.
>> CORRECT
When my family talk about their worries, l listen sincerely.
>> When my family talks about their worries, I listen sincerely.
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