How can someone enrich their life without spending a lot of money?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think small routines help me become a better version of myself.
I enjoy reading books and watching economics YouTube videos help me imporve myself.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Susan!
It’s nice that you tend to add small routines in your life, which helps you improve and develop. I agree! Nowadays, because of digital technology, we can already enrich our lives by learning online. I also learned how to cook through YouTube!
- T. Caitlyn
I think small routines help me become a better version of myself.
>> CORRECT
I enjoy reading books and watching economics YouTube videos help me imporve myself.
I enjoy reading books and watching economics YouTube videos help me imporve myself.
>> I enjoy reading books and watching economics YouTube videos because they help me improve myself.
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