How do gardens reflect the culture and traditions of a society?
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Gardens show how people feel about nature and God. They use fancy styles to show off power or money. They also tell the story of a group\'s history and travels.
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How do gardens reflect the culture and traditions of a society?
Gardens show how people feel about nature and God.
>>> OR: Gardens are living symbols of how people connect with nature and God.
They use fancy styles to show off power or money.
>>> Gardens often use elaborate styles to display power or wealth.
They also tell the story of a group\'s history and travels.
>> OR: Gardens also narrate the story of a community’s history and journeys.
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