How do you relax after a busy day?
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Well, it can vary from person to person, but I rarely move and stay home.
I think I need to relax for sure when I rest, so when I take a break, I spend a lot of time lying in bed, and most of them sleep. Sometime I look for dramas and entertainment shows that were pushed back with delicious food, go to nearby cafe, visit libraries to enjoy a quiet atmosphere.
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Well, it can vary from person to person, but I rarely move and stay home.
>> CORRECT.
I think I need to relax for sure when I rest, so when I take a break, I spend a lot of time lying in bed, and most of them sleep.
>> I think I need to relax for sure when I rest, so when I take a break, I spend a lot of time lying in bed, and most of the time, I sleep.
Sometime I look for dramas and entertainment shows that were pushed back with delicious food, go to nearby cafe, visit libraries to enjoy a quiet atmosphere.
>> Sometimes I catch up on dramas and entertainment shows that I’ve saved for later while eating delicious food, or I go to a nearby cafe or visit a library to enjoy the quiet atmosphere.
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