How does social media affect people’s perception of health and body image?
학생이 쓴 원문
Social media strongly influence how people see health and body image. People compare themselves to others and feel pressure to look way, but it can also encourage healthy habits and self-confidence.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Susan!
Absolutely! Whether social media can be good by inspiring us to be healthy or bad by making us feel insecure and compare ourselves depends entirely on us. Great job on your homework! Just take note that \'social media\' is treated as singular here, so the verb should be \'influences.\'
- T. Caitlyn
Social media strongly influence how people see health and body image.
>> Social media strongly influences how people see health and body image.
People compare themselves to others and feel pressure to look way, but it can also encourage healthy habits and self-confidence.
>> People compare themselves to others and feel pressure to look a certain way, but it can also encourage healthy habits and self-confidence.
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