How has one of your friends influenced your personality or life choices?
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They influenced by showing new ways to think and and. And when my friend made a choice, it gave me courage to try something similar. And seeing my friend chasing a specific industry make the choices feel more attainable for me.
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How has one of your friends influenced your personality or life choices?
They influenced by showing new ways to think and and.
>>> My friend influenced me by introducing me to new ways of thinking.
And when my friend made a choice, it gave me courage to try something similar.
>>> Seeing them take risks gave me the confidence to try new things myself.
And seeing my friend chasing a specific industry make the choices feel more attainable for me.
>>> It really helped to see someone I know succeeding in that field; it made everything feel more \'doable\' for me.
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