How has technology changed the way families gather or communicate?
학생이 쓴 원문
Technology makes it easier to talk. We communicate daily through Social media. Also, Thanks to Social media, we close to each other even when live far.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Susan!
You are right! Social media has made it possible to communicate with people even when they are far from us. It helps us have continuous communication wherever we are and makes maintaining relationships easier.
- T. Caitlyn
Technology makes it easier to talk.
>> CORRECT
We communicate daily through social media.
>> CORRECT
Also, Thanks to Social media, we close to each other even when live far.
>> Also, thanks to social media, we can stay close to each other even when we live far apart.
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