How is renting different from owning a property?
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Renting is very different from owning a property.
It happens when you pay rent per month or week to use other people\'s property.
It kinds of lease to borrow.But owning a property doesn’t happen rent, but it could pay tax and take care of its condition.
However, renting is also different from countries, such as method to pay and when they pay.
In Korea, most of renting is contracted to pay rent per month or put guarantee.
For example, when someone contracted with owner for two year guarantee, she just paid amount of money, and owner have to return after two years.
And then, foreigners wonder how to gain benefits to owner. When amount of money is saved in the bank, it occur some profit (interest rate). The owner just takes this.
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Hi, So [이름]!
This is a very thoughtful explanation. I like how you didn’t just define renting and owning, but also compared how it works in different countries. It shows good awareness of real-life systems, especially when you mentioned the Korean deposit system. It’s a strong example that makes your writing more interesting.
Overall, this is a strong and informative composition. Keep writing like this! You are developing a good ability to explain real-world topics in English.
~Teacher Polly
Renting is very different from owning a property.
>>CORRECT
It happens when you pay rent per month or week to use other people\'s property.
>>It happens when you pay rent per month or per week to use someone else’s property.
It kinds of lease to borrow.
>>It is a type of lease to borrow a property.
But owning a property doesn’t happen rent, but it could pay tax and take care of its condition.
>>But owning a property does not involve paying rent; instead, it may involve paying taxes and taking care of its condition.
However, renting is also different from countries, such as method to pay and when they pay.
>>However, renting is also different across countries, such as the method of payment and the timing of payment.
In Korea, most of renting is contracted to pay rent per month or put guarantee.
>>In Korea, most rentals are contracted to pay rent monthly or with a large deposit (jeonse).
For example, when someone contracted with owner for two year guarantee, she just paid amount of money, and owner have to return after two years.
>>For example, when someone signs a contract with an owner for a two-year deposit system, they pay a large amount of money, and the owner must return it after two years.
And then, foreigners wonder how to gain benefits to owner.
>>Then, foreigners may wonder how owners gain benefits.
When amount of money is saved in the bank, it occur some profit (interest rate).
>>When a large amount of money is saved in the bank, it generates profit (interest).
The owner just takes this.
>>The owner earns this interest.
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