How is the zoo in Hokkaido different from other zoos
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In the Hokkaido zoo, there were many cold-weather animals such as polar bears, seals and penguins. And it seemed like they placed more importance on natural environment.
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Hello, Susan!
It\'s nice to know that the zoo in Hokkaido places importance on the natural environment, since it\'s a good way to protect the animals, especially those that are not typically found in Asian countries, like the ones you mentioned.
- T. Caitlyn
In the Hokkaido zoo, there were many cold-weather animals such as polar bears, seals and penguins.
>> CORRECT
And it seemed like they placed more importance on natural environment.
>> It also seemed like they placed more importance on the natural environment.
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