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2017-11-27 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

학생이 쓴 원문

1.A good friend does:-When I was sad, he litsen to why I am sad. -When I heart my leg, he hep to go hospital in school. -when I don't have friends to play he playing with me. 2.A bad friend does:-Kick and hit me. -Tease me nadrun away. -Push my anus.(But I hit him too;;;)

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!

This is the first time you\'ve prepared a composition for this class.

Thank you for giving it your best.

Keep working hard! ^^

~~ Teacher Sharon

When I was sad, he litsen to why I am sad.

>> A good friend listens to me when I\'m sad.
When I heart my leg, he hep to go hospital in school.

>> A good friend takes me to the school clinic when I hurt my leg.
when I don\'t have friends to play he playing with me.

>> A good friend plays with me when I have no one to play with.
Kick and hit me.

>> A bad friend hits and kicks me.
Tease me nadrun away.

>> A bad friend teases me and then runs away.

Push my anus.(But I hit him too;;;)

>> A bad friend hits me at the back but I hit him too.

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