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2018-01-25 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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I don't belive Santa Clus. Because I saw my parent give christmas present to me, and Santa Claus can't give present to us. The reason is our apartment don't have chimeny, and Santa Clus can't give present for all kids in the world at within a night. So, I don't belive Santa Clus by the above reasons.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!

Please be careful of your spelling.

We can talk about the correct way to make sentences.

You just have to be careful of your spelling.^^

~~ Teacher Sharon

I don\'t belive Santa Clus.

>> I don\'t believe in Santa Claus.

Because I saw my parent give christmas present to me, and Santa Claus can\'t give present to us.

>> This is because I saw that my parents were the ones giving me the gifts and not Santa Claus.
The reason is our apartment don\'t have chimeny, and Santa Clus can\'t give present for all kids in the world at within a night.

>> Also, our apartment doesn\'t have a chimney and Santa Claus can\'t give presents to all the children in the world in one night.
 So, I don\'t belive Santa Clus by the above reasons.

>> Because of these reasons, I don\'t believe in Santa Claus.

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