HW 3.30
학생이 쓴 원문
I heard that intermittent fasting is the best way to lose weight. It\'s the way that people wait around sixteen hours after eating first. I heard that hunger is kind of healthy sometimes.
I had tried this diet to lose my weight, exactly make my face slim, but I failed. It was hard for me to starve. At that time, I didn\'t have any energy for today\'s work. So, I gave up.
I\'m sure that people who are on a diet are respectable.
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon, [이름] [이름]!
By intermittent fasting, accordingly, our body repairs its own cells and tissues, thus, it is good for that point. Meanwhile, if someone is sick or has some nutrient deficit, this should not be recommended.
Since you tried it before, you can attest to its advantages and disadvantages.
Thank you for sending me this homework. I know that you have already done it but forgot to send it. It was a very good one. Read carefully the suggestions in grammar.
See you in class tomorrow.
-T. Donna~
>>> I heard that intermittent fasting is the best way to lose weight. It\'s the way where people wait around sixteen hours after eating first. I heard that hunger is healthy sometimes.
I had tried this diet to lose my weight, exactly make my face slim, but I failed. It was hard for me to starve. At that time, I didn\'t have any energy for today\'s work. So, I gave up.
>>> I had tried this diet to lose my weight, and it exactly made my face slim, but I failed. It was hard for me to starve. At that time, I didn\'t have any energy for the day\'s work. So, I gave up.
I\'m sure that people who are on a diet are respectable.
>>> Correct! Very good sentence!
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