HW 4.14
학생이 쓴 원문
I like listening to America music, especially hip hop and R&B.
I like Usher\'s music because it\'s so powerful and energetic. I always think that old school music is much better than recent music. I\'ve known Usher\'s famous music before but I didn\'t know that the singer is Usher. When I first watched the Super Bowl three years ago, I realized that he was the singer.
I also enjoy Kanye\'s music, but he\'s causing a lot of trouble these days, so I think it could be hard to say I like Kanye West.
A song that I\'ve been listening to is \"This Love\" by Maroon 5.
강사 첨삭
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Congratulations on a very well-composed homework answer!
American music has been a part of our lives since they are at the center of the world in terms of almost all aspects. Nevertheless, we also have our own shares in music especially South Korea in terms of K-pop.
I like Usher has between the two artists that you have mentioned because his melody and lyrics are on point. Untile this day, we can still sing along to their tunes.
Kanye indeed had been into a lot of trouble with his anti-semitism remarks and his troubled treatment to his ex-wife and present wife.
This Love by Maroon 5 is iconic and has a great rift!
You have only one grammar suggestion, excellent job!
See you later.
-T. Donna~
I like Usher\'s music because it\'s so powerful and energetic. I always think that old school music is much better than recent music. I\'ve known Usher\'s famous music before but I didn\'t know that the singer is Usher. When I first watched the Super Bowl three years ago, I realized that he was the singer.
>>> I like listening to American music, especially hip hop and R&B.
I like Usher\'s music because it\'s so powerful and energetic. I always think that old school music is much better than recent music. I\'ve known Usher\'s famous music before but I didn\'t know that the singer is Usher. When I first watched the Super Bowl three years ago, I realized that he was the singer. Very good sentences!
I also enjoy Kanye\'s music, but he\'s causing a lot of trouble these days, so I think it could be hard to say I like Kanye West.
I like Usher\'s music because it\'s so powerful and energetic. I always think that old school music is much better than recent music. I\'ve known Usher\'s famous music before but I didn\'t know that the singer is Usher. When I first watched the Super Bowl three years ago, I realized that he was the singer. Very good sentences!
I also enjoy Kanye\'s music, but he\'s causing a lot of trouble these days, so I think it could be hard to say I like Kanye West.
>>> Correct! Very good sentences!
A song that I\'ve been listening to is \"This Love\" by Maroon 5.
A song that I\'ve been listening to is \"This Love\" by Maroon 5.
>>> Correct! Very good sentences!
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