HW 4.23
학생이 쓴 원문
I used computers a lot until I was in middle school. I was really into computer games at that time, but after I went to the high school, I lost my interesting about game. Since then, I don\'t almost use a computer, and I don\'t even have it. I mainly use a laptop and my phone to search for somethings.
I used a smart watch for six months about three years ago, but I didn\'t no more because I changed my phone to an iPhone. It was a Galaxy watch. Actually I\'m not fit in using watch, because my wrists are thin.
I\'m sorry for skipping today\'s class. I drank a lot last night to celebrate finishing the exams. So, I woke up at 12 today. I will study hard from now on because all my exams are over.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름] [이름]!
You are evolving to be a more matured man. This is evident with your dissipating interest in gadgets. Many people of your age are still using them in doing unnecessary things like playing, watching, among many recreational means.
Since you make good use of your time, you are wise to know that gadgets, when used productively makes your life better in the future. It is a tool for your success.
Congratulations for finishing all of your midterm exams! I understand what it means to you.
Read all my suggestions and memorize the correct patterns.
See you later.
-T. Donna~
>>> I use computers a lot until I was in middle school. I was really into computer games at that/ the time, but after I went to the high school, I lost my interest about games. Since then, I don\'t almost use a computer, and I don\'t even have it. I mainly use a laptop and my phone to search for some things.
I used a smart watch for six months about three years ago, but I didn\'t no more because I changed my phone to an iPhone. It was a Galaxy watch. Actually I\'m not fit in using watch, because my wrists are thin.
>>> I used a smart watch for six months about three years ago, but I didn\'t anymore because I changed my phone to an iPhone. It was a Galaxy watch. Actually I\'m not fit in using watch, because my wrists are thin.
I\'m sorry for skipping today\'s class. I drank a lot last night to celebrate finishing the exams. So, I woke up at 12 today. I will study hard from now on because all my exams are over.
I\'m sorry for skipping today\'s class. I drank a lot last night to celebrate finishing the exams. So, I woke up at 12 today. I will study hard from now on because all my exams are over.
>>> Correct! Very good sentences!
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