HW 4.28
학생이 쓴 원문
If we don\'t apologize for our mistake, we can lose our relationships with important people like family, friends, teacher, and so on. It\'s just easy to say sorry and that\'s enough, but many people don\'t do this because of their pride.
In business, if we don\'t apologize, we could be ignored from all teammates, and my boss don\'t evaluate me as itself.
But apologizing makes things worse in some case. If we are arrested and apologize to someone, it\'s like to admit and accept my guilt. I know apologizing is important, but also we can admit what we didn\'t commit. So, I\'ve leaned that if you commit, you should keep silent and contact a lawyer.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름] [이름]!
The price of pride and not saying sorry is sometimes too expensive. If we do not say it when necessary, we have to pay the price.
Professionally, we have to be accountable at all times and admit our mistakes. Otherwise, we will be met with sanctions.
If you always do your best, there is no reason to apologize.
Read, study, and analyze carefully the underlined parts of your composition and know their correct patterns. You did a wonderful job!
See you.
-T. Donna~
In business, if we don\'t apologize, we could be ignored from all teammates, and my boss don\'t evaluate me as itself.
>>> If we don\'t apologize for our mistakes, we can lose our relationships with important people like family, friends, teacher, and so on. It\'s just easy to say sorry and that\'s enough, but many people don\'t do this because of their pride.
In business, if we don\'t apologize, we could be ignored by all teammates, and my boss wouldn\'t evaluate me as objectively.
But apologizing makes things worse in some case. If we are arrested and apologize to someone, it\'s like to admit and accept my guilt. I know apologizing is important, but also we can admit what we didn\'t commit. So, I\'ve leaned that if you commit, you should keep silent and contact a lawyer.
In business, if we don\'t apologize, we could be ignored by all teammates, and my boss wouldn\'t evaluate me as objectively.
But apologizing makes things worse in some case. If we are arrested and apologize to someone, it\'s like to admit and accept my guilt. I know apologizing is important, but also we can admit what we didn\'t commit. So, I\'ve leaned that if you commit, you should keep silent and contact a lawyer.
>>> But apologizing makes things worse in some case. If we are arrested and we apologize to someone, it\'s like admitting and accepting my guilt. I know apologizing is important, but we can also admit what we didn\'t commit. So, I\'ve leaned that if you commit, you should keep silent and contact a lawyer.
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