HW 4.8
학생이 쓴 원문
Productive thing I\'m doing is preparing for my middle term exams because I\'m a student. I can\'t just hang out with my friends like some freshman. I\'m studying all day more than eight hours, and I\'m getting tired.
When I was in Japan, I thought that I would be really busy after coming back to Korea. So, I just enjoyed the last Japan\'s life, and then I didn\'t review my major. That\'s why I\'m so busy now, I\'m reviewing the past thing at the same time. But because of reviewing, I feel like I understand my major better.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름] [이름]!
I admire your diligence and perseverance in studying hard. I never studied quite as serious as you do. Maybe I would have been a doctor or a lawyer now if I did. ^^
Being productive means yielding results from the goals you have set, and apparently, you have been doing so well. So keep it up and stay laser-focused on your dreams.
Below are some underlined parts of your composition. They contain some suggestions in grammar that will help you improve your writing skills. This homework is very good!
See you.
-T. Donna~
>>> The productive thing I\'m doing is preparing for my middle term exams because I\'m a student. I can\'t just hang out with my friends like some freshman. I\'m studying all day more than eight hours, and I\'m getting tired.
When I was in Japan, I thought that I would be really busy after coming back to Korea. So, I just enjoyed the last Japan\'s life, and then I didn\'t review my major. That\'s why I\'m so busy now, I\'m reviewing the past thing at the same time. But because of reviewing, I feel like I understand my major better.
When I was in Japan, I thought that I would be really busy after coming back to Korea. So, I just enjoyed the last Japan\'s life, and then I didn\'t review my major. That\'s why I\'m so busy now, I\'m reviewing the past thing at the same time. But because of reviewing, I feel like I understand my major better.
>>> When I was in Japan, I thought that I would be really busy after coming back to Korea. So, I just enjoyed the last days in Japan\'s life, and then I didn\'t review my major. That\'s why I\'m so busy now, I\'m reviewing the past things all at the same time. But because of reviewing, I feel like I understand my major better.
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