HW 5.12
학생이 쓴 원문
I\'ve never been on a business trip, but I used to participate in events where I was invited to receive prizes and scholarships.
I got a scholarship from finance company, Miraeseet, and I was invited to Seoul. So, I took a care of clothes.
I also participated in an award ceremony for creating video about social welfare. My team went to Daejeon, and we won the second prize.
I had a duty to participate in those events, so if I didn\'t go there, I couldn\'t receive at all.
I bought a suit for my sister\'s wedding, so I will wear suits from now on.
강사 첨삭
Hello there, [이름] [이름]!
Since you are not yet a professional, you can call the trips you had in the past as a school representative or delegates. I am so impressed with this revelation. I know you had that grit to compete and win it. It is one of the best feelings to be awarded for being adroit in the field of social welfare.
May you have more successes soon! Take a photo of yourself with that elegant suite.
Review all my grammar suggestions below and determine the correct patters. Well done!
See you in class.
-T. Donna~
>>> Correct! Very good sentences!
I got a scholarship from finance company, Miraeseet, and I was invited to Seoul. So, I took a care of clothes.
I also participated in an award ceremony for creating video about social welfare. My team went to Daejeon, and we won the second prize.
I had a duty to participate in those events, so if I didn\'t go there, I couldn\'t receive at all.
I got a scholarship from finance company, Miraeseet, and I was invited to Seoul. So, I took a care of clothes.
I also participated in an award ceremony for creating video about social welfare. My team went to Daejeon, and we won the second prize.
I had a duty to participate in those events, so if I didn\'t go there, I couldn\'t receive at all.
>>> I got a scholarship from the finance company, Miraeseet, and I was invited to Seoul. So, I took a care of clothes.
I also participated in an award ceremony for creating a video about social welfare. My team went to Daejeon, and we won the second prize.
I had the duty to participate in those events, so if I didn\'t go there, I couldn\'t receive an award at all.
I bought a suit for my sister\'s wedding, so I will wear suits from now on.
I also participated in an award ceremony for creating a video about social welfare. My team went to Daejeon, and we won the second prize.
I had the duty to participate in those events, so if I didn\'t go there, I couldn\'t receive an award at all.
I bought a suit for my sister\'s wedding, so I will wear suits from now on.
>>> I bought a suite for my sister\'s wedding, so I will wear suites from now on.
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