HW 5.14
학생이 쓴 원문
Snice I hurt my back, it had been painful, but since I started running, it\'s been getting better. First time I was painful when I run because the shock from the ground come to my back. But I got gradually used to the shock, and I didn\'t even feel painful anymore.
Through running, I can train my stamina, and it also helps me with other sports like tennis and soccer.
And the best part is running is free! We can run anytime and anywhere.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름] [이름]!
Running is one of the most famous workouts nowadays. I saw this when I emceed a fun run. Hundreds of people attend and they really look like they truly care about their health and fitness.
In your case, it boosts other physical activities and pushes your stamina to a higher level. Since you are young, you can maximize the potentials of running. So put on those running shoes and run out there today!
Review the underlined suggestions here on your composition. Overall, your ideas are clear and your structure is great. Carry on!
See you next week.
-T. Donna~
Through running, I can train my stamina, and it also helps me with other sports like tennis and soccer.
>>> Since I hurt my back, it had been painful, but since I started running, it\'s been getting better. The first time it was painful was when I run because the shock from the ground went up to my back. But I got gradually used to the shock, and I didn\'t even feel pain anymore.
Through running, I can train my stamina, and it also helps me with other sports like tennis and soccer.And the best part is running is free! We can run anytime and anywhere.
>>> The best part of running is it is free! We can run anytime and anywhere.
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