HW 5.19
학생이 쓴 원문
My favorite appointment is to go to my parent\'s house. I usually go there once a week. I can\'t wait hanging out and walking with my dog.
I also can eat delicious foods for free, and get some money for parents. Especially, I like my mom\'s food and it can make me feel healthier than normally I eat.
I always walk around the lake with my dog pushing a baby car when I\'m in parent\'s house.
It\'s a very peaceful place for me.
I also like drinking with my friends. I\'m feeling bored because I usually spend my time studying in the library, at the university, and with my circle members, so it\'s very refreshing for me. If I had a girlfriend, I think I could stop drinking so much. Our university festival is held from Wednesday to Friday, and I heard that there is a SNS exchange event for matching couples, so I\'ll submit my ID!
강사 첨삭
Good evening, [이름] [이름]!
It is heartwarming to know that going home is your favorite appointment. Your mom might be sad to find out that your dog is the reason why. ^^ We could agree that there is really no place and food like home.
Go to the university festival and meet wonderful people there. Make sure that your ID is perfect to meet your dream girl. Do not drink too much so you can use your time wisely.
Thank you for answering the homework question. Your composition is enjoyable to read and meaningful to digest. Well done!
See you tomorrow.
-T. Donna~
I also can eat delicious foods for free, and get some money for parents. Especially, I like my mom\'s food and it can make me feel healthier than normally I eat.
I always walk around the lake with my dog pushing a baby car when I\'m in parent\'s house.
It\'s a very peaceful place for me.
>>> My favorite appointment is to go to my parent\'s house. I usually go there once a week. I can\'t wait hanging out and walking with my dog.
I can also eat delicious food for free, and get some money from my parents. Especially, I like my mom\'s food and it can make me feel healthier than I normally eat.
I always walk around the lake with my dog pushing a baby car when I\'m in my parent\'s house.
It\'s a very peaceful place for me.
I also like drinking with my friends. I\'m feeling bored because I usually spend my time studying in the library, at the university, and with my circle members, so it\'s very refreshing for me. If I had a girlfriend, I think I could stop drinking so much. Our university festival is held from Wednesday to Friday, and I heard that there is a SNS exchange event for matching couples, so I\'ll submit my ID!
I can also eat delicious food for free, and get some money from my parents. Especially, I like my mom\'s food and it can make me feel healthier than I normally eat.
I always walk around the lake with my dog pushing a baby car when I\'m in my parent\'s house.
It\'s a very peaceful place for me.
I also like drinking with my friends. I\'m feeling bored because I usually spend my time studying in the library, at the university, and with my circle members, so it\'s very refreshing for me. If I had a girlfriend, I think I could stop drinking so much. Our university festival is held from Wednesday to Friday, and I heard that there is a SNS exchange event for matching couples, so I\'ll submit my ID!
>>> I also like drinking with my friends. I\'m feeling bored because I usually spend my time studying in the library in the university, and with my circle members, so it\'s very refreshing for me. If I had a girlfriend, I think I could stop drinking so much. Our university festival is held from Wednesday to Friday, and I heard that there is an SNS exchange event for matching couples, so I\'ll submit my ID!
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