HW 5.6
학생이 쓴 원문
I love visiting Japan and I want to live there someday, but I don\'t think changing my nationality is useful for me. I can live in Japan as a foreigner working at Japanese company. I feel like living in Japan as a Korean is not bad, because many Japanese people like Korea culture and they are interested in Korea. So, keeping my Korean nationality can be an advantage. If I lived in Japan as a Japanese citizen, I would become an ordinary Japanese person. I want to be an unique person, haha
I\'m sorry for missing today\'s class. I forgot to set my alarm, so I just slept a lot.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름] [이름]!
You are a patriot of your country. For South Koreans, retaining citizenship is deeply tied to legal benefits, social obligations, and cultural identity. The decision to change nationality is often viewed through the lens of fairness, obligation, and privilege, particularly given the country\'s unique security context and high-stakes social environment.
You do not need to be a Japanese to live there. This is your privilege.
Your composition shows clarity and accuracy. Great job!
I understand why you could not make it to class. See you later.
-T. Donna~
>>> I love visiting Japan and I want to live there someday, but I don\'t think changing my nationality is useful for me. I can live in Japan as a foreigner working at a Japanese company. I feel like living in Japan as a Korean is not bad, because many Japanese people like Korean culture and they are interested in Korea. So, keeping my Korean nationality can be an advantage. If I lived in Japan as a Japanese citizen, I would become an ordinary Japanese person. I want to be a unique person, haha...
I\'m sorry for missing today\'s class. I forgot to set my alarm, so I just slept a lot.
I\'m sorry for missing today\'s class. I forgot to set my alarm, so I just slept a lot.
>>> Correct!
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