HW 5.9
학생이 쓴 원문
I had never lend my beddings anyone before, but I changed my mind. When my friends came to my place, I used my bed and my friend stayed on the floor. But, I felt it was rude to treat guests to sleep on the floor. So, now days I allow my friend to sleep on my bed and I go to the floor.
I\'d never lend my smart phone to anybody. There is a lot of private information. Only I can lend it to someone if they need to make a call or send a message. Someone try to see other\'s smart phone, but I can\'t understand that. Despite of the relationship of lovers or family, I can\'t share my phone.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, [이름] [이름]!
This is an interesting question. We value things differently and beddings and the smartphone are absolutely for private use. One could say, they will never lend their toothbrush to anyone but we did this with my bestfriend when we camped before! ^^
One thing is for sure, lending is kindness and with your intention to make your guests feel welcomed and the hope that they will do the same when you visit their place too is mutual respect and care towards one another.
Thank you for sending this before your go to school. Please analyze the underlined words or phrases and master their correct forms.
See you tomorrow.
-T. Donna~
>>> I had never lend my beddings to anyone before, but I changed my mind. When my friends came to my place, I used my bed and my friend stayed on the floor. But, I felt it was rude to treat guests to sleep on the floor. So, nowadays I allow my friend to sleep on my bed and I go to the floor.
I\'d never lend my smart phone to anybody. There is a lot of private information. Only I can lend it to someone if they need to make a call or send a message. Someone try to see other\'s smart phone, but I can\'t understand that. Despite of the relationship of lovers or family, I can\'t share my phone.
I\'d never lend my smart phone to anybody. There is a lot of private information. Only I can lend it to someone if they need to make a call or send a message. Someone try to see other\'s smart phone, but I can\'t understand that. Despite of the relationship of lovers or family, I can\'t share my phone.
>>> I\'d never lend my smart phone to anybody. There is a lot of private information. I can only lend it to someone if they need to make a call or send a message. Some people try to see other\'s smart phones, but I can\'t understand that. Despite the relationship of lovers or family, I can\'t share my phone.
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