HW 6.2

2026-06-03 · 첨삭 강사 Donna

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To avoid lying, it\'s the best to be humble. And not talking a lot also helps to avoid lying. I think exaggerating is the people\'s personality, so the longer we talk, the more we can lie to hide our reality. I\'m not good at lying, because my face turns red when I lie, so I try to live honestly. But honestly, I think it\'s hard to alive in the tough world. I feel like that lying and being shameless can be more than being honest. My conclusion is I have to improve my lying skills.

강사 첨삭

Hello, [이름] [이름].

A saying tells that what we do not know would not hurt us. This means that if we are not caught lying, it may be fine, it would not hurt others. On the contrary, chaos awaits all the lies when they come to light.

I agree that less talk, less mistake and lies. We always want to be the protagonist in our own stories. However, being honest about our weaknesses, our candidness to our true self towards others, and our imperfections makes us more human. These too are appreciated by honest people. As they say, we can lie to people sometime but not all the time. Hence, lie at your own risk. 

Train to be honest and logical, rather than lying to avoid responsibility and accountability.

Your ideas and insights are impressive. Keep it up!

See you.

-T. Donna~

To avoid lying, it\'s the best to be humble.

And not talking a lot also helps to avoid lying. I think exaggerating is the people\'s personality, so the longer we talk, the more we can lie to hide our reality.
>>> To avoid lying, it\'s (the best/ best) to be humble.
Not talking a lot also helps to avoid lying. I think exaggerating is people\'s personality, so the longer we talk, the more we can lie to hide our reality.


I\'m not good at lying, because my face turns red when I lie, so I try to live honestly.
But honestly, I think it\'s hard to alive in the tough world. I feel like that lying and being shameless can be more than being honest.
My conclusion is I have to improve my lying skills.
>>> I\'m not good at lying, because my face turns red when I lie, so I try to live honestly.
But honestly, I think it\'s hard to alive in a tough world. I feel like that lying and being shameless can be more than being honest.
My conclusion is to improve my lying skills.

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