HW 6.23
학생이 쓴 원문
I want to get my own house if I married. Even if I didn\'t marry, I also want to get my own place, because the renting cost is waste a bit. I think owning my house is the big goal for most people. If I have a house, I don\'t need to be afraid of paying rental fee every month, and don\'t need to think of the interest rate of banks.
So, If I can do this, I will buy my house instead of renting.
I think the second floor is the best floor to live, so I don\'t care about living on a high floor. I can save money a little bit when I buy a house.
강사 첨삭
Good morning, [이름] [이름]!
Owning a home provides long-term financial security, a cushion against inflation, and the freedom to customize your living space. Unlike renting, where payments build wealth for a landlord, homeownership helps you build equity and establish roots in your community.
By all means, own a house someday. It is one of the goals of living comfortably with your family or even just by yourself.
Now, imagine how your dream house would look like. Soon, you shall have it.
Understand the grammar suggestions in the underlined red text and use the correct forms as you speak and write. Great job!
See you in class.
-T. Donna~
>>> I want to get my own house if I\'m married. Even if I didn\'t marry, I also want to get my own place, because the renting cost is a waste of money. I think owning a house is the big goal for most people. If I have a house, I don\'t need to be afraid of paying rental fee every month, and I don\'t need to think of the interest rates of banks.
So, If I can do this, I will buy my house instead of renting.
I think the second floor is the best floor to live, so I don\'t care about living on a high floor. I can save money a little bit when I buy a house.
>>> So, if I can do this, I will buy my house instead of renting.
I think the second floor is the best floor to live, so I don\'t care about living on a high floor. I can save money a little bit when I buy a house.파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.