HW 6.24
학생이 쓴 원문
In some case, we can save money for renting if we are easy to get tired of something. I have those personality that used to get tired easily, so I think that it\'s better to rent than to buy sometimes. But, it\'s not easy to suppress my desire wanting a new one.
We can save time by renting. For example, if I want to travel with a motor bike, it\'s easier to rent one near my travel destination instead of bringing my motor bike from my country. So, renting helps save time.
강사 첨삭
Good evening, [이름] [이름]!
The goal is to become economical in spending in deciding to rent. Renting for practical reasons is for the wise. If one cannot afford to buy, then renting is key.
I hope the day will come that all of your things are bought and used for your convenience. That day translates to power and wealth.
Read on and make sure to remember the suggestions. Great job!
See you tomorrow.
-T. Donna~
>>> In some cases, we can save money for renting if we easily to get tired of something. I have that personality of getting tired easily, so I think that it\'s better to rent than to buy sometimes. But, it\'s not easy to suppress my desire wanting a new one.
We can save time by renting. For example, if I want to travel with a motor bike, it\'s easier to rent one near my travel destination instead of bringing my motor bike from my country. So, renting helps save time.
>>> Correct! Very good sentences!
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