HW 6.25
학생이 쓴 원문
I want to speak express opinion more, but I\'m not a good talker, so I need to think carefully about what I want to speak.
I\'m also introverted, so I often hesitate when it\'s my turn. I think this personality can be an advantage in life. I think keeping quiet and just listening can help to avoid the meaningless argument.
I want to be a good talker who can express my own opinion logically and speak more clearly. I\'m going to resister for a speech academic during summer vacation. I think I have to prepare for future interviews when I have free time. I\'ll improve my speech skill, and become less nervous in interviews.
강사 첨삭
Good evening, [이름] [이름]!
I wish I had your calm and quiet mode. I absolutely agree that silence is peace\'s bestfriend. However, it is inevitable not to be outspoken in profession and things you deserve.
Your plan of joining a speech club is truly beneficial for your career. When you get the chance, attend all the training and make sure to speak with substance and confidence. It should be better than the way you write.
By then, your pace must be uninterrupted, your pronunciation is impeccable, and your tone and intonation are sophisticated. You do not need me that time anymore.
Visit the grammar suggestions below and ask questions in class when you have one.
Very good!
See you.
-T. Donna~
I\'m also introverted, so I often hesitate when it\'s my turn. I think this personality can be an advantage in life. I think keeping quiet and just listening can help to avoid the meaningless argument.
>>> I want to speak to express opinion more, but I\'m not a good talker, so I need to think carefully about what I want to speak.
I\'m also introverted, so I often hesitate when it\'s my turn. I think this personality can be an advantage in life. I think keeping quiet and just listening can help to avoid meaningless arguments.I want to be a good talker who can express my own opinion logically and speak more clearly. I\'m going to resister for a speech academic during summer vacation. I think I have to prepare for future interviews when I have free time. I\'ll improve my speech skill, and become less nervous in interviews.
>>> I want to be a good talker who can express my own opinion logically and speak more clearly. I\'m going to register for a speech academic during summer vacation. I think I have to prepare for future interviews when I have free time. I\'ll improve my speech skills, and become less nervous in interviews.
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